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March Stuff Plus

Tuesday, April 5th, 2011

A little late, but just as well because it saves me from having to post an update.

Writing: 12,068 words = 5 pts
Submissions: 4 = 4 pts
TOTAL = 9 pts

Originally it was 5 submissions for 5 points, for a total of 10, but then I got that SASE back. [sigh] I’m assuming the rest of the package didn’t make it, so I re-sent the submission, but that’ll count for April. I have one fewer points for March, but I have an April point already, yay.

I’m not terribly happy with the writing total, either. I’ve certainly had months with fewer words written, but I did all of that by about halfway through March, and fully expected to hit at least 20K by the end of the month. I had some medical issues come up at that point, though, and they were pretty distracting. Still are, actually, although I think I’m over the hump now. Briefly, I have a pretty severe edema (that’s Doctorese for “swelling”) that started in my feet last summer and has progressed up my legs to just below the knee. In mid-February, I got this huge blister in one shin that I thought was caused by an overly enthusiastic space heater, but even after we got rid of the heater, I kept getting more blisters. After about three weeks of diuretics and four weeks of steroid cream, plus random foot-elevating and tight wrapping, the edema’s gone down a tiny bit (not nearly enough, though, and I need to get back with my doctor about turbo-charging the diuretic) and I haven’t gotten any new blisters in a few days. I still have open sores all over my legs at this point, but if the blisters stay away, the sores will eventually heal and I’ll have only the edema itself to deal with.

The dermatologist I was referred to was incredibly busy, so on my first visit I saw his PA. Which is fine; I’ve seen plenty of PAs before and never had a complaint. This guy, though, wasn’t a great communicator. He forgot to mention a couple of key facts on that first visit — one, that the edema itself can cause blisters, there doesn’t have to be some underlying condition or disease to do it, and two, that the steroid cream was just for the itching and wasn’t meant to speed the actual healing of anything — which left me thinking the situation was a lot worse than it actually was. If anyone feels like looking up “bullous pemphigoid,” that’s what I thought I had for a while. It’s not as bad as cancer or something, but it’s pretty distracting. :/

I talked to the dermatologist himself for a few minutes on the second visit, and my third visit (yesterday) was solely with him, and he’s a much better communicator. He’s actually able to be thorough in his explanations — and he draws diagrams even, with labels and arrows — without coming across as condescending. Great skill, much appreciated. The fact that things are starting to clear up, at least on the blister-and-sore level, is also helpful; it’s easy to appreciate your doctor when you’re improving, whether it’s actually due to anything he did or not.

The edema has to go down further, though. I can’t wear any of my regular shoes, and can only get into my velcro-strap sandals if my feet are bare. Socks (basic crew socks, nothing thick) add just enough bulk that the straps won’t stay stuck. I missed an evening concert already because of a lack of available footwear, and Jim and I are going on a cruise in early May, and to a convention in late May, and I need to be able to wear shoes at least part of the time at (and on the way to and from) both events. A friend of mine who’s a pharmacist has told me that my current dosage of the diuretic is very tiny, so ramping that up to something effective shouldn’t be a problem.

Meanwhile, I need to keep my feet elevated as much as possible. That’s logistically difficult, given my habit of spending 90% of my waking time on the computer, but I think I have it worked out, mostly. We’ll see.

Angie

February Stuff

Tuesday, March 1st, 2011

Submissions — 2pts
Writing 14,176 words — 6 pts
Editing 9196 words — 2 pts
TOTAL = 10 pts

That’s 2/2 toward my 2011 goal of being on Koala Approves every month, yay. :)

Koala Challenge 9

Also, A Hidden Magic is a Recommended Read on Jessewave’s site, which is pretty darned awesome. :D

Angie

Legal Questions About AI

Wednesday, February 2nd, 2011

I’ve blogged about the Law and the Multiverse site before, but I have to link to them again. Today’s post is about Non-Human Intelligences and there’s a whole shelf full of potential SF novels just in this one paragraph:

If the program is a person, is powering down the computer on which it is running murder? Does a powered-down AI have a right to be powered back on? If the program is copied, do we now have two people? Is deleting one of the copies homicide? If the program is installed on a person’s computer against their will, do they have to take care of it forever or can they delete it? Does introducing a trojan horse constitute assault, or is trespass a better analogy? Is the essence of the being the code, the running program, or what? Does the consciousness reside on the hard drive or in RAM? Maybe the CPU cache? What if the program is installed on a really slow computer? In a theoretical sense it’s still the same program, but is it still intelligent? We don’t even really think about regular programs with this kind of rigor, so something as sophisticated as an AI is likely to make a court draw a bright line that means it doesn’t have to think about that stuff.

This is a great site, and should be on the RSS feed reader of everyone who writes SF.

Angie

January Stuff

Tuesday, February 1st, 2011

Posting Bio — 1
Submissions — 3
Writing 6833 — 2
Editing 18,974 — 3
TOTAL — 9 pts. yay!

Koala Challenge 9

I don’t believe I missed another editing point by 26 words! [headdesk x a dozen]

It also makes my writing log look weird. I do my best to keep track of how things are going, wordcount-wise, and when I go through editing I usually have some weird little number. Figure, you delete some, add some, rewrite a sentence or a paragraph, diddle with your wording here and there, and after how ever many hours of work you end up with a total of 18 words over where you were before. Which looks ridiculous on the table, like I did ninety seconds of writing that day. Editing’s like that, though. :/

Anyway, one of my New Year’s goals was to be on Koala Approves (at least nine points) every month this year. I just made it for January, thanks to the Koala granting us a one-time point for posting a bio on the New-Challenge-Starting-Yay post. I’ll have to do it all on my own this month, and with three fewer days too, yikes!

Back to work. :)

Angie

Discussion on “The Chosen Hero”

Sunday, January 30th, 2011

NK Jemisin and Sam Sykes were talking about the Chosen Hero trope in fantasy, and the various ways in which it’s problematic if you think about what-all it implies about how the world works. It’s short but it makes a lot of good points, and Sam posted it on his blog. It’s definitely worth a read for anyone who writes or reads fantasy.

Excerpt from Sam:

But in terms of philosophy, I sometimes wonder if the whole concept of The Chosen One isn’t a toxic one. I occasionally wonder if it’s right to put the concept of someone utterly infallible in all that he does out there, if it’s right to put up this concept that birth matters more than effort. Or, at the very least, if it’s right to put it out there without questioning it.

Excerpt from Nora:

And Chosen Ones who are “select people” or have some birthright to leadership are even more problematic, because then you get into eugenics. If some people are *meant* to be rulers, then that means some people are meant to be ruled — and the latter group can therefore never be allowed to have the power to self-govern. Why give it to them if they’re genetically or magically or psychologically less fit for leadership? And while you’ve got two divisions of people (“select people” and peons, patricians and plebians, whatever you want to call them), why stop there? If some people are especially fit to rule, why not decide that some people are especially fit only for combat, and some only for skilled trades, and some only for intellectual pursuits? And maybe some people aren’t fit to do anything but die, because they’re old or disabled, or because some of your industries (e.g., mining) are especially dangerous and you can’t spare anyone *valuable* to do that kind of work. You’ve just created a eugenicist caste system, whee.

There’s more, it’s good, click through and read. :)

I’d never thought of the Chosen One trope from this POV before, but the conclusions do follow from the given. Having the gods or whoever point a finger and say “You” implies that they’re saying “Not You” to everyone else. None of the other people can become the hero, the ruler, the winner, no matter how hard they work, how good or moral or smart they might be. And yeah, that creates an underclass of people who might as well not even try to ever be more than a farmer or a potter or an assistant pig keeper, because that’s what Fate has written for them and that’s what they’re suited for, The End.

I’m trying to think of ways to subvert this. You could have someone who’s been Chosen to perform some task, but maybe that’s all they’re good for and everyone knows it. So you’ve got a bodyguard/babysitter following the Chosen One around to make sure he doesn’t choke on his own shoes before fulfilling his narrowly-focused but necessary destiny, and once he’s done, give him his reward, pat him on the head, and send him home.

Or you can come at it from the POV that the god/Fate/Oracle/whatever doesn’t decide who’s going to do great things, but rather knew who was going to do what. Certain sects of Christianity have spent a lot of time wrestling with the whole predestination question, but to me there’s a clear difference between causing and knowing. If you assume omnicience but not omnipotence, then your oracle can say “This one, but not that one,” with no question of actually controlling anyone’s life. Or maybe you have a Hero’s Oracle who’ll give a prediction to anyone who comes to ask, but the people who come to ask (a long journey over hard terrain, of course) are the ones with the ambition and ability, and thus the ones more likely to get a “Yes, You” sort of answer. [ponder] But anyone can do it; it’s up to them.

Another thought — the oracle would have to give “No Comment” type messages to some people, because foreknowledge can change the decisions a person makes. Or even lie to them sometimes? Although that kind of manipulation could be considered interference and you’re back to having the oracle choose people and force a path upon them. [ponder] Maybe the person’s response to hearing their fate is part of it? Maybe it’s just a potential — so if you ask, “Will I be a hero?” the answer tells you the most heroic future you have available to you at that time, and it’s your choice to work toward it or turn away. If your potential heroism is to step in front of an arrow and die saving the girl who’s going to eventually defeat the Evil Wizard-King, well, some would be content with that and some would say “No freaking way!” and high-tail it back to the smithy. But what if that choice impacts the prediction given to the girl who came last week and was told that she could defeat the Evil Wizard-King?

This could get twisty. Of course, that just makes it more fun to play with. :)

Angie

The 2011 Koala Challenge

Tuesday, January 4th, 2011

McKoala has the 2011 challenge page posted — head over and comment to sign up. An explanation of how it all works and how to earn points is on the linked page.

I had a lot of fun with it last year, even the [mumblecough] months when I pretty much flaked out, and found it helped me with my writing, and particularly with my submissions. If you’re motivated by this sort of month-by-month challenge then I highly recommend this one. :)

Angie

December Stuff and New Year Stuff

Sunday, January 2nd, 2011

16,544 words written — 7 pts
4 submissions — 4 pts
TOTAL = 11 pts, yay!

Koala Challenge 9

My writing total for the year was 78,130 words. That’s less than ‘09, which was a bit over 102K. :/ On the plus side, I sent out 26 submissions last year, which is more than any other year, and in fact I’m pretty sure that’s more than total number of submissions I’d ever sent out before in my life, which is pretty darned cool, so I’m proud of myself in that area.

McKoala’s Challenge definitely motivated me there; she’s getting ready to start up a new round for 2011, and I highly recommend it. It’s fun and motivating and you get cool graphics even if you flake off. :) I’ll do another post with a link when the sign-up page is posted.

You know, I was sure I posted some goals for this year back in January, but I can’t find them now. [squint] I was in the middle of getting ready to move at the time, so I might’ve been a bit delusional. :P What I remember was something like finishing and submitting the next novel in the Hidden Magic verse, plus some short stories (in any verse.) I didn’t finish the novel :( but I had eight short stories circulating around, and three of them got published, so that’s not too bad. Oh, and I wrote that SF romance for the Goodreads event, which is a freebie on my web site now

For the coming year, I will get that darned novel done and in (grrr!) and at least another eight stories. The 2010 wordcount was awful; I’ve got to improve that this year. I need at least one more free story for the web site, too. Ideally I want a free (stand-alone) story on my web site in each subgenre I write in, so people who want to check me out before paying money can try whatever kind of story they’re into. So add at least one more free story to the total, bringing it up to at least nine.

And I want to be on Koala Approves every month this year. I should be able to do that — 20K words written for the month earns nine points all by itself, and for each story submission I can subtract 2K words written and still make goal. That’s not even counting editing points. It should be doable if I don’t flake out. Given the realities of my variable brain chemistry, I’m sure I will flake out periodically, but if I shoot for a perfect score, maybe I’ll only miss a few times. [crossed fingers] You’ve gotta aim high, right? :)

Best of luck to everyone for 2011. [wave]

Angie

Speculative Law

Thursday, December 16th, 2010

I’ve recently found a really wonderful blog written by a couple of attorneys, and I have to share. It’s called Law and the Multiverse, and it’s full of great legal discussions of questions you’ll never run into in a law review.

For example, what are the legal issues related to being immortal? I have an immortal character in my Hidden Magic series, so that post was particularly welcome.

Another post was about characters who are invulnerable or otherwise incredibly difficult to kill — how would that affect crimes committed against them, such as murder and assault? Is it actually attempted murder if you knew at the time that your victim wouldn’t die when you shot him 72 times?

There’s a discussion of outlawry that starts with its historical precedents and projects it into a present or future where there are criminals conventional law enforcement can’t deal with, and another discussion about resurrection, probate law and insurance.

The blog is oriented around comic book universes — superheroes and supervillains — but the info here would be useful for an SF world too, or a world where paranormal creatures or powers exist, or an urban fantasy type setting. And besides, it’s just fun to read. Highly recommended.

Angie

November Stuff

Thursday, December 2nd, 2010

This is going to be really short, ’cause I have two pressing deadlines and I’m actually late on one of them. [flail]

First, this is a great video of Ian McKellan talking to a film festival audience about filming the balrog sequence in Rings. It’s very short — a minute and a bit — and funny. Check it out. :)

Second, NaNo pretty much fizzled halfway through, but I got almost 20K words on the book, which is a great jumpstart. The Goodreads M/M Romance group is doing a holiday promo where writers write a story based on a photo and a request posted by a reader. One of the photos spawned a plot-bunny, so I volunteered. It’s taking a lot longer than I thought to write it (so what else is new?) but I like the story, and it’ll eventually be a stand-alone free read for my web site, which I’ve needed for a while. Also, for doing this I get a book-of-the-month promo slot in the group later in 2011, for a book of my choice, which I’ll admit was attractive. I decided it was worth setting Emerging Magic aside for a bit to do this. I’ll post here with a link when the story goes up.

Oh, I had a new story released and didn’t even post about it! Gotta love the holidays…. [facepalm] Hell Is in the Details is a funny short story (okay, it’s kind of long for a short, but it’s a short on a technicality) about Benioth, the Demon of Laziness, who hasn’t read his memos for a while — like, decades. He’s missed a few changes in policy and is in trouble with his boss. :)

November stats:

Writing 21,562 words — 9 pts.
Editing 17,106 words — 3 pts.
Wrote 1 synopsis — 1 pt.
TOTAL = 13 pts, woot!

Koala Challenge 9

Some Book Recs

Monday, November 22nd, 2010

I’m up at my mom’s doing Holiday Stuff, plus trying to write, and (kinda-sorta) keep up with online stuff only not really, so this is going to be short.

Judy Tarr has published a collection of her horse blogs in a book called Writing Horses — The Fine Art of Getting it Right. This is a book about writing horse stuff the right way, by a writer who also breeds horses. I’ve been reading these blog posts all along over at the Book View Cafe, and I definitely want this book so I can have all the good stuff in one place. The info is presented in a way that particularly serves writers who are writing about horses. I’ve written a bit of horse stuff using horse reference books intended for people who have and/or ride horses, and Judy’s method is definitely better if you’re writing instead of riding. Highly recommended.

I know I’ve mentioned Kristine Kathryn Rusch’s Freelancer’s Survival Guide here before. She started posting chapters on her blog for free back in early 2009, believing that the economy made it imperative that the info get out to people immediately, rather than in the year or three it would’ve taken to shop a proposal around, write the book, then wait for the steady but slow gears of New York publishing to get it into bookstores. This is an awesome collection of info, experience, do-and-don’t lists, things to think about, assorted resources, and things you never knew you absolutely needed to know. It’s useful for freelancers of every kind, but examples pertaining to writers turn up fairly often. :) The link above goes to a page where you can buy the paperback version (580 pages!), but it’s also available as an e-book, and it’s still up on Kris’s blog in chunks for free. Any writer who’s making or hoping to make money on their fiction should read this, in whatever format. Me, I’m going for the paperback.

Angie